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[Effing Adventure Games]

Weird..

Is the character supposed to be able to run and jump while balancing on his head? You should look into that. Also, add some music or sfx next time. I didn't feel very motivated to finish the game when I'm forced to do it in silence.

Good luck on your next project!

DKC1011 responds:

Hey DavidStanly.
Thanks for your message.
As I have addressed in many messages the head thing was an unficable gravity glitch caused because the chracter was so small. as for the Sound i am still learning the program i use and don't know how to add music/sound yet but i will in a future update or a patch.
Thanks again for your message

[Future Runner]

Nice!

Very smooth and challenging! I love the look of everything. Slowly increasing the speed was a nice touch.

[DownFall]

Not Bad.

Clean graphics make your game pretty easy to understand.
I would reccomend adding gravity to the ball, so that it increases its speed as it falls. Maybe add a little bounce as well. The game was simple, so there's not much incentive to continue playing it for a long time. Good job on this early game!

[The Planet Quiz]

Well done!

It does exactly what a quiz is supposed to, and yes, I did learn a bit. I had forgotten how many moons orbit Saturn :P
I liked what you did with the 'I Quit!' button, that was unexpected.

[Invader X]

You are progressing nicely!

This game plays much smoother than your first. It's good to see that you are finding flaws and fixing or tweaking them. I'd love to collab with you on a game sometime....I've never been able to see my animations in that format! Cheers!

[Reservoir Pulp Invaders 2]

Wow...!

I had no idea you were programming now.... this is great for a first attempt. Keep up the good work dude!

MarkySpark responds:

Hey Davey! i just said I would learn and do a game in 2 weeks and that's what I did.

[Spongebob game demo]

Pretty Cool!

Not a bad game, but there were some things that I noticed:

The background doesn't look too much like Bikini Bottom. Try adding some of the flowery plants you see on the show.

Collision detection was off occasionally. On some platforms, Squidward just kinda sunk into the ground.

Definitely consider adding attacks and more checkpoints/lives.

I'm not bashing your work, I could never make a game like this! I hope you finish it and improve upon your good work so far!